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Post by zotar Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:14 pm

In a dream i had, there was a song, that i like but could only remember one line of the lyrics. That line was, "Untill you walk out that door." So i wrote them down and started more of the song.

Ahem...

the chorus is something like this:

We can live and love till the world grows old
Fight evil never faced
we can write stories never told
crossing through time and space
Together we can change the world
unless you walk out that door
All is possible and more
Untill you walk out that door
untill you walk out that doo-ooo-ooor...

Theis wpould be one of the beginning parts:

Live as outlaws
Living in an endless Epic
Go the distance
adventuring through thin and thick
Fight the evil
Fighting for whats right
bridge the bondries
cross from darkness into light.
what do you think

And... thats as far as my early morning inspiration got. I plan to revise and finish it later...

what do you think?

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Post by JET73L Sun Jul 27, 2008 7:56 pm

I like it. The first bit seems like the tune should be similar to the original Pokemon theme. The second sounds like it would be best with a Dun... dun duh, duhn.. duhn duh-duhn duh-duuuuhn.. sort of thing. What tune is it supposed to be?
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Post by zotar Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:50 am

JET73L wrote:I like it. The first bit seems like the tune should be similar to the original Pokemon theme. The second sounds like it would be best with a Dun... dun duh, duhn.. duhn duh-duhn duh-duuuuhn.. sort of thing. What tune is it supposed to be?

it would be something like that^ (Except for the pokemon part.)

Its a commonly used rythm.
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